This is our second draft of the script. We improved this by adding a more detailed opening and adding some more information to the actions and descriptions of the scene. This helped us a lot when planning on filming our credit sequence as it gives us a helping hand with what the actors have to do and how to set things up. We removed some dialogue as we researched other credit sequences and dialogue was kept to a minimum. This meant that we had to remove some but this resulted in making the film more abstract which was our original aim.